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my 2nd scheme by davens07 my 2nd scheme by davens07
this is my 2nd scheme! which do u prefer? flatroof? or the one-sided rooF? :) comment and suggestions are much appreciated!
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duckling1992 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Student Artist
It's a good-looking design and very modern. You have included handy features which I normally forget about in my own designs. Have you designed the interior?

I would always choose a slanted roof over a flat one. Flat roofs are more likely to leak and the last thing you want is water running down the walls and everything - not good for the building.
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davens07 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2010  Student Interface Designer
wow thanks man.. hmm..i ddnt made the interiors i was catching up the deadline. lol i just fit my design as the client suggested. actually mine is more cubic minimalist style. hehe feel free to visit my other works. btw thank you so much for your comment. i appreciate it a lot.comment on my research center as well, i want to see your point of view on my works.thanks :dance:
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viperbrix Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010   Interface Designer
i like this one...kinda unique
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davens07 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Student Interface Designer
thanks man :dance:
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viperbrix Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010   Interface Designer
no problem,sir
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jasonCpierce Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010
my vote is for the flat roof. the project is a series of cubes. the slope roof truncates the top portion and forces eye movement vertically. the flat roof extends the horizontal plane to infinity giving the impression of a larger living space. i would also consider the proportions a little bit to emphasize this horizontality, maybe the ceilings should be a bit lower and the glazing divisions longer along the x axis.
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davens07 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Student Interface Designer
wow..thank you soo much! it really is fascinating to be commented by Pro's like you.. yeah the lot is more of a rectangular.. thanks :Dance:
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Corsico Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
definetly this roof! It works out much better as a composition
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davens07 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Student Interface Designer
thank you so much..its 3-0 now..lol i like the flat roof :#1:
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aymnelgwady Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
nice work, i like the background
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davens07 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010  Student Interface Designer
wow thank you so mucH! :) but your rendering in podium is way too cool compared to mine :) :teamwork:
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akinlolugboji Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010
Depends on the climate. In Nigeria where there is a lot of rain, the one sided roof as long as it has a slope to drain of water. In temperate regions the flat roof is ok.
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davens07 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010  Student Interface Designer
oh yeah...here in philippines,we have tropical climate..so for me, I prefer the flatroof for its simplicity..thanks you so much!
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illmatic1 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010
I think they both have their charm. This one, at least in terms of the roof, looks more realistic since it seems to have some significant thickness/beef to it. I prefer this one because it feels more dynamic. But I think it also depends on the location - if its a snowy area this seems more appropriate versus the flat. However, if snow is the case... I'd probably make sure the roof overhangs don't dump/drain directly on top of the car port. Nice work.
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davens07 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010  Student Interface Designer
wow!! thank you so much! you really look into the design as well. yeah,i have problems with the carport. The owner didn't yet decide on what to do,thats why those trellis above it are conditionals just to let him visualize what im thinking :) thank you! appreciate it alot :dance: :headbang:
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illmatic1 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010
No problem :)
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